View the Shark Tank Pitch and Update after reading the Shark Tank article for classwork. Write 5-7 complete sentences discussing your analysis of the article and video clip.

2/17/2015

elena knight

2/17/2015 06:44:36 am

Her business is called ''simple sugars'' whens he was 11 years old she started making her own business which grew. She did everything on her own business deals handled paper work like a grown women . As a high school student her sales were 13,000 she focused and her sales grew to 38,000 by herself with no funding. The investors offered her 33% for 100,000 . I like her sales and she is determined and i would invest in her .

Shameka Tillman link

2/17/2015 06:45:44 am

during her presentation i think she did a good job on presenting her product to the sharks. the product she presented is like some type of cream for skin.the deal that was offer to her at the end of the presentation was 100,000 dollars and 33% of her business . i think the product is a good ideal.

Andrew Anderson

2/17/2015 06:58:11 am

The business concept presented was, simple sugars. Simple Sugars is a skin care product. The owner of simple sugars explained her product very clearly and got straight to the point. Every question that was asked to her she responded quickly with a good explanation. She explained her reason for making the product in a good sense of language that made the investors like her product. Although everyone did not want to invest in her product, she still made a good impression on all of them. The investor Mark offered 100 thousand dollars and she accepted his offer. I personally would've invested in her product because, I like the way she presented and had a plan to make the results of her product grow.

Marty Blanks

4/29/2015 05:52:51 am

I respect your opinion but I do not agree with you. First, I felt she could have been more prepared. For example, she could have been more direct to the shark's questions. The lack of interests and offers proves my point. If she would have been more prepared then she probably could have had better competing offers. I do however agree with you that her product is one that I myself would use.

gabby

2/17/2015 06:59:25 am

18 year old seller started a business when she was 11 years old. her business started growing when she hit high school because she would sell them in school. while she was presenting her product in front of the sharks , she didnt look nervous at all. she knew what to say and she gave lots of details why they should invest her product. 4 out of 5 of the sharks didnt agree with her investment. the one that agreed with her investment offered her 33% of $100,00 of the company. she accepted his offer. if i was a shark , i would have invested in her product.

Ana

2/17/2015 07:04:35 am

During her presentation i think she did an excellent job. She did a lot of stuff alone just to get were she wanted. She went to all her meetings alone .She made a deal after the presentation it was 100,000 dollars and 33% of her business. Her product will help a lot of people too.

Odales R

2/17/2015 07:06:43 am

This video was about a girl who started a product called simple sugars. her product grew more and more by time but needed and investor. during her presentation she did everything correctly. 4 of the sharks did not agree with her product because she was to young. 1 shark liked her idea and invested into 33% of her company. I liked her product i would had invested in her company because it seem like a good investment and would make lots of money.

Chris Munoz

2/17/2015 07:06:58 am

i think the presenter did well becuase she pesented well and her item was good. everyone would like to have soft skin. So it think it would be a sell out product for her.And she will make her money back fast and have her part and his part of money.She wuld be able to mke a profit beacuse of the poeple that will like to have soft skin.

jorge mayorquin

2/17/2015 07:10:35 am

This young 18 year old girl wants to make her business grow , it is called simple sugars it is a skin moisturizer that makes skin softer and also smells good. She has her own little place with workers that make the product and also they have sold 60 percent of the product on they're online market. She at the moment has not convinced all sharks there is one left , he gets convinced offers her 100 thousand dollars for 33 percent of company , she agreed. A year latter she made up to 300 thousand for her own and gave the shark investor a check of 200 thousand the double of what he had offered in the begging to invest.

Diana Gonzalez

2/17/2015 07:10:59 am

She did a very good job building her business "Simple Sugars" from the ground up given that she was only 11 years old when she made it. Also having to give up a whole year of high school so she could focus on her business. When she was 18 her year sales were 55,000 dollars,when she turned 20 her year sales were 3 million dollars.

miqwain

2/18/2015 03:33:20 am

she did a spontaneos job on her presentation especially when she said she started at 11 yrs old i think that her product simple sugars is going to be helpful in life with people who has skin problems and her product is the answer for it.

diana lopez

2/18/2015 11:45:56 am

well I think that she did an excellent job explaining what the product was and how it was use and what the product could be used for. she explain the product really well without getting stuck. every question that was thrown at her she answered quickly and she also answered them really well. although not all of the investors liked her product, mark was the only one that did the product got his attention. he offered her 100 thousands dollars and she excepted his offer. I would of invested in her product the reason why is because she came in well prepared explained the product really well about what it does and how it worked, she could also answer any question that was asked.

Marty Blanks

4/29/2015 05:41:01 am

I first wanted to talk about her opportunity cost. Even though she did not have a picture perfect childhood she went for her dreams and ended up with a good product called Simple Sugars. I think the offer was fair because it is only thirty three percent of the company for a hundred thousand which means her company is worth 300,000. However, I do believe if she were more prepared she could have gotten a better deal. For example, when one of the sharks asked a direct question about her product she started talking about her childhood and I felt that turned the shark away because his question was not answered.

View the Shark Tank Pitch and Update after reading the Shark Tank article for classwork. Write 5-7 complete sentences discussing your analysis of the article and video clip.

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